Hope you are doing well! For this activity you will write about the music video we watched in last classes. Post your comments before August 1st!
1. Write your own version of the story in the music video we watched last classes. Try to use a short tale's writing structure: introduction, body and conclusion.
Introduction: it usually offers something that changes / affects / motivates the characters of the story to overcome a situation.
Body: it usually reveals how the characters move toward overcoming the situation.
Conclusion: it has to do with facing one difficult choice and decides one correct option while working out of the situation.
3. Language/writing aspects:
- Simple sentence structure: subject + verb + complement.
- Look for useful vocabulary you need.
- Check grammar, spelling, punctuation rules, etc.
- Check grammar, spelling, punctuation rules, etc.
All your writings will be welcome as comments... Thanks for participating!
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ReplyDeleteMy own version of the story:
Once there was girl that have a good live not perfect but it was good she don´t have lots of friend but have 1 or 3 she was happy or that was that some people think.She was sad because her "friends" just like to be with her because her parents have money and she was really sad but although she don´t said anything.
One day she was at the college and saw the boy she likes suddenly she shout but it was because one of her friends scare her and the boy saw she and simile so she think that if some think pass to her the people pay attention to her she told that to one of her truth friends and she said that she don´t have to do that just for attention but she don´t hear and she left.
some time after she break up whit her boyfriend because she was always with him and don´t let him just for one minute she decide to attract the attention of someone else making believe that she was going to kill herself and the boy saw she and go to help her he invited she to take a coffee and she try to kiss him , but he was married and let she at coffee shop she go behind him but he were angry said that let him she was sad and go another time to kill her self to attract the attention of someone else to find someone that love her.
THE END
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ReplyDeleteOnce there was a girl that had problems, she was doing wrong at work, her boyfriend had nearly left her, at the work she was like that kind of "invisible" people and she was sick of it, so she depressed a lot and didn´t knew what to do with her life, she thought she was ugly and that nobody loved her.
She wasn´t really happy with her life, and one day at the work she had what she named "a good idea"...
Then she ran and ran and she found a building with an opened door, so she ran up the stairs and went to the rooftop and stood on the edge to jump, meanwhile, in the street am man was walking, and one of her shoes fell near to the man, so he realized what she was going to do, so he ran up the stairs and convinced her not to jump, while she calms down, he got her to a café, they had a coffee and was leaving, but then she tried to kiss him, but he pushed her off, and showed her a ring so she knew that he was married, he left her but she jumped on his back, he continued walking but she arrived him again, so he clarified that he didn't wanted anything with her, she got angry and started following him, he started arguing, so he clarified again that he didn't wanted a relation with her but this time on an angry tone, so he left her again, but this time she didn´t followed him, sad and angry she went to the rooftop again, and looked at the street an another man was passing, so she threw him again one of her shoes, hoping he wasn´t married.
what a strange way to conquer someone!!!!!!!!!!
THE END.
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ReplyDeleteAnd this is my version of the story, I called it "Strange Loving":
One day there was a girl that was so shy and she didn't loved her life, she wanted to kill she, because she don't had someone that loved she, was a lonely person, she didn't had friends and she was unsocial.
She went to a big building at New York City and she went to the terrace and at the end she was going to jump and die. At the edge one of her shoes went down to the street, but no one watched that.
But there was a man that was passing at that street and saw that shoe, He looked up and watched the girl, He ran and went to the terrace of that penhouse and gave his hand to the girl, She watched that she wasn't invisible to all people, and she thought that he was in love with her, she said to him: "Thank you for saving my life, you're my hero".
He went with she to a cafe, they drank tea, and the girl felt that he was so nice and she thought that she also was in love with him, the boy wanted to go, so he said goodbye and he was going to hug her and she tried to kiss him, He said that he was married and he had a family, but to her it didn't matters and started to follow him. He ran all the street but she was following him yet, she said that they were the one to the other but he was conscious that he was married and that he didn't liked her in any sense, first because she didn't loved her life and second because his wife was more sexy than her. The girl was following him yet, there was one point that he was so angry and he hold her and shout that he was married and that he didn't liked her, that there are more boys in the world than only he and he gone, the girl was so angry and she also gone.
She went one more time to the penhouse terrace at the edge and with a purpouse to conquer someone she took off one of ther shoes and took it down to the street waiting that one single and nice guy watched her shoe and went to save she and finally found the love of her life.
And that it's why it is a strange loving, I hope one day she finally find someone that loved her and stop doing that madness.
Thanks for watching , I hope you liked my story.
BYE,BYE ;)
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ReplyDeletemy story is...
She drops her shoe as Considine is walking in the street below. He sees Ashfield and immediately runs to the top of the building. He puts out his hand then he and Ashfield hug. The two walk to nearby cafe and sit down to have coffee. Ashfield makes an attempt to kiss Considine. He stops her, showing his wedding ring, then walks out of the cafe but she makes an attempt to follow him. He gets her up against a fence and threatens her before walking off. Ashfield then runs back up to the top of the building where she purposely drops her shoe in front of an unsuspecting but then she remember that she leave her stove on and decide to return. When she is in her house start to look sad films an eat ice cream but she looks that dhe have a newneighboring and when she see is the same boy who save her life and she decide to spy him. Then of that she talk with him and he say that her wife live him then he fall in love with him end they got married.
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ReplyDeleteOne day a famous actress is sitting in a chair of a TV program and the driver of this program put a challenge, would you have a program of jokes Melissa? And she says ohh, clear that yes.
A week later, the actress says that her TV program starts on July 7. This day is a special day for me because my program of jokes starts and if the people like the program, I can continue with this.
on Monday in the morning the actress is in a building with hidden cameras, and the joke is that , when passing a man, she throws her shoe al vacuum for he the believe , that she wants to end his life. She throws her shoe in the head of the man and he looks up and he realizes that she is about to jump.
He run’s up the stairs of the building and goes where all the cameras are and realizes it's a joke.
Ok this is all in the news today, I am Yadida Black and return with you to the studio Richard...
Thanks Yadida, in other news...
Ok, well my story is small but I like it and , i hope that you liked too
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ReplyDeleteMy own version of the story:
On a normal day a man was walking home pair to go with your wife and children, when you see a building through a shoe thrown on the floor looks up and sees a woman who is going to commit suicide, run and save women.
When going to a coffee shop down for a coffee and tells him because he was going to kill himself, and tells the lady thanks him for saving her, he tries to give a kiss and the man shows her wedding ring and goes, but the lady does not give up and still chasing.
The man crosses the street and walks by an alley, women still chasing it and does not let the man grabs against a fence and says that nothing can happen between them because he is married and has one child, then the woman gets furious and runs hacie the building where he met with the Lord, and up to the last floor to turn to suicide and sees a man who goes through there and throws the shoe. She just wanted to be loved.
THE END
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ReplyDeleteHi all !!!!
My own version of the story:
once upon a time a girl named Meril, she was a very shy person and also small and childhood and youth, but sometimes she could talk to someone but after all was finished going because she was so ugly that she never had friends or boyfriends, her parents always encouraged though that did not last long breath, so in the course of life was not easy being her, always so lonely, you could see the breaks just a romance book, every week was a new one.
over the years became a young lady who was entering a new university where had several groups , she wanted to go to the best social group "the pretty girls" from the moment she stared to try join the group to be admitted, and were the auditions day she got very excited but the girls in the group laughed at her for not being as beautiful, then rejected, she insisted and she says “let me be in the group”, the girls thought and thought and then said the girls thought and thought and then said, than your challenge would get a boyfriend, she headed to her house ready to get a boyfriend, was under a lot, went to the aesthetics and searching through all your clothes the best, she take many library books , online and all sources of information you have about dating and boyfriends.
However much she tried and tried no one liked then after a few days she began to surrender she decided that if anyone could not like it, that if serious ugly for all life and not be considered in the group “pretty girls”.
Thought it best to commit suicide, so went up to a building and was about to jump she dropped a shoe and a young man who spent can see, quickly climbed the stairs to her, and told her gently not and then to calm her invite for a coffee and
Meril think win the boy but she tried kissing and the boy came out running, she was angry that nobody wanted and that was losing the challenge, no intension that boy gave an idea of how to attract boys, trying it more times hopefully she can find someone who wants it and she will be happy
CONTINUAD...
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ReplyDeleteI am think whit the video for Artick Monkeys, its to a song for deseperation of the love whit the wil like a men and dont have a one for this, the women its have a problem
The history was stard to a women to like a men and gose cut the relation and the wome dont like and his think to susid was the best idea and a men was pas whit this part and the shoose is in the wall and the meen see the shhose and go to save the women and go to take a coffe the women was propouse at the man to boyfriend and he is have a girlfrind and thegirl go to persig the men and the men as desing to talk whit the girl and the women was go to the apartament and go to susided and other man its past the same thing. was a trmp
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Hello this is my version of the story
ReplyDeleteA man look a little depressed by the death of his dog and decided to go find the "replacement" of your dog and hit the nearest adoption center had, on the road going
Across the street when suddenly saw that a woman was falling of a parachute so he went behind her to help her not callera after a good achievement to reach out and take away a foot and pull it to descend at the end I can Cunado makes landfall if the authentication look into the eyes of the she thought it was ugly but it instead to the much liked and when I leave it safely on the ground said goodbye to her but she would not go longer single so I decided to follow him to his house everywhere.
As before everything was going to go to the pet store she followed up and found a street before jumping on him and knocked him to see that she was very angry he stopped and told him to stop chasing and is out when told that she was in a bad mood and decided to take revenge by not talking to her.
After the one day buy his dog with saleo the dog for a walk and she fixed that left at three in the afternoon, the next day also at three in the afternoon and the fourth day she decided to leave the park one poisoned piece of bread and when the dog came out with the bread and ate at night when he was asleep and the dog suffered a heart and the next day the dog was found dead.
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ReplyDeleteOnce there was a girl that had problems in your work and in his life, and one day she decided jumping off a building but in this moment a man see a woman in the roof of a building and he decided run to stop the woman but the woman fall but she fall in a trampoline and the man invites have coffee
When going to a coffee shop down for a coffee and tells him because he was going to kill himself, and tells the lady thanks him for saving her, he tries to give a kiss and the man shows her wedding ring and goes, but the lady does not give up and still chasing.
the man says goodbye to the woman but the women start to follow and tells her not to bother who is married and she is depressed and see the building up another and throws a shoe when passing a man have if her boyfriend
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ReplyDeleteI think that...
a girl who had problems with her boyfriend was depressed to the point of "suicidal" throwing themselves a building, but it really was a plan to make someone love her. That plan was to throw a shoe at the street for a man to look at her and save her, take her for coffee and so in love.
The plan worked, the man went to save her and then took her for coffee but that man was married to have something with her, she did not give up, chased him and then realized that the plan had not worked.
The woman went to "suicide" again to make the same plan to another man ...
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ReplyDeleteThis story starts with an argument that isn´t so popular, a man and I women...well this man was dreaming with a real love of a real woman, and a woman was sad because the man that she believed it was his real love, was sad because he have framed she with ther woman. This to persons were sad, but the girl was completely sad, and she thought the world was saying a message to her, "you have to leave this place". Well, she went to a building and dropped from this, and the man saw it. He ran and finally he catch her and he fall in love. The girl also fall in love with the man. The man invited her to a café and both tried to start something. But the man felt again what he have felt with the other girl that deceptioned him. And he tried to escape. The girl didn´t let him escape. The man escaped, but the girl didn´t give up and follow him. The man was tired and he threatened her. Also, he decided to hit her, as someone said, love hurts.
Well, the girl decided to try to suicide again, and she believed the story could repeat. And that was what happened, and you know what happens next, and, if you don´t, let´s return at first and read again!
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ReplyDeleteThis is my own version of the story.
Once there was a girl that wanted to be loved, but it wasnt easy, because she was really shy and didn't know how to talk to guys. She was having problems in her house and maybe what she needed was company, someone with she could spend time and forget about problems, so she made a plan that could help her to get a "mate".
She went to a really tall building, she went to the highest floor and stand at the border of the building. She was about to "commit suicide", so she threw her shoe off the building and it fell to the Street. A man was passing through the Street and saw the shoe. he looked up and saw te girl at the border of the building. He quickly ran to where she was and offered his hand to rescue her. She took it and then they hugged. They went to a cafe to the girl looked a lot to the man. She tought that her plan was going good, so she tried to kiss him. He stopped her and showed to her the ring to prove he was married, but she tried to kiss him again. The man scared went away but the girl followed him. After a while the girl hit and shouted at him, but the man pushed her too. Then she realized that her plan didn't worked.
She ran to the building to do the plan again, and she threw the shoe into the Street. But I think that if you want to be loved, you don't have to do this, you just have to break your fears and win the affection from the people.
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ReplyDeleteThis my version of the story:
One day was a girl in her house she was eating pizza alone because she doesn't have friends and her husband doesn't care she but she is suffering everyday but that day she go to the park to make friends, fortunately she make one friends it was a boy and he was so beautiful and she talk and see he everyday in the park, every time that they see they love was to strong but he doesn't feel the same that she fells, because of that was separated from her husband and when she tell this to her friend the friend was surprised and he say to she that he doesn't want nothing whit him.
When she hears that she was so sad and disappointed that she did, but doesn't lost the hope and she tray to work to pay a house, in the work she met whit people but that not real friends and they now that, one day she fight whit the chief and was farewell and because of that she go to the last flat and trie to suicide but they throw her shoe and one boy look that he ran to rescue when he did that they go to drink something and talk when he was gone she started to chase he but he that he has family and when she hears that she go again to the apartment.
To think better the things and she understood that the only she have to do in the life is work and had a good an d real family.
THE END
THANKS YOU FOR YOUR REAFING
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ReplyDeleteThis is my own version of the story.
One day I was walking on the street, thinking about my girlfriend because we are getting married in two weeks! I was really happy, but in a second a shoe fell from the sky, like a rain of shoes or something like that. In that moment I was really really scared and confused, so I decided to looked up, in the roof of a really tall flat was a woman; in the moment I saw her, I knew that something was wrong, so as fast as I could, I ran to the roof. When I was in the roof, I was trying to find were the woman was; the woman was in the shore of the flat, when I saw her, fastly, I ran and touched her in her shoulder and when I did that, she looked at me with a sad and a sorry look... It was so weird to me because in the moment she looked at me, I feel something strange! But returning to the story, when I touched her and she looked at me, she hugged me and she sais me: Thank you!
For me it was really weird, because I have never been in that situation, but it doesn't matter, I had to help her!
I invited her to drink a coffee, when we were in the cafe we started to talk about our lifes. When I looked at my clock, I realized that I was late for a meeting I had with my girlfriend, so I said to the girl that I had to leave now, and that was great to knew her. In the moment I said goodbye, she tried to kiss me, but I showed her my ring and I went out of the cafe without saying nothing!
When I was walking, I noticed that someone was chasing me... Was she, the woman I already knew! I tried to walk as fast as I could, but it didn't work. I started to get angry, so I shout her that I had a girlfriend and I went away.
The next day, my best friend called me and said me that something very weird passed to him, guess what? The weird thing that passed to him was the same thing that passed to me with the woman, and was teh same woman at the same day! I was really angry with the woman, because it was a game, but for me it was a terrible thing and for that I helped her. Ok, after that I decided to never talk to her again; and now I don't know wher and how she is, and it's good for me!
That's all!
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ReplyDeleteThis is my version of the story:
One day I was walking on the street looking for a teddy bear. When I left a store a shoe felt in my head so I think that there was a fight shoe so I looked up when a saw a girl... I was so scary because she was really close to felt, so I ran into the building and I say to she that trust me and take my hand... she told my her and was so sad, so I invite she to a caffe, there we talk a lot and I say to she that I had girlfriend and I was so happy with she, but I think that she didn't understand because she told me if I want to married with she, I say no because we didn't know but she start to say that I was a horrible person because I save she and a lot of more horrible thinks.
Then I start to ran because i didn't want to see her face again but she ran behind my so I had ti scream... when I went to my home I tell the story to my girlfriend but she think I was crazy... that why I'm in the mental hospital.
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hi everyone this is my story:
ReplyDeleteOk one day of a gimnast and actress, she plays a movie.she have to jump on the top of a building to oppite to other top, she accidentally fell...
In the street there is a guy how drive a mattresses Inc...
When he girl fell in mattress, she cry because she is
Very scared and very happy because she doesn´t die, then she faint and the guy see her in the roof he climb and see her faint , he go to the hospital but anyone meet hem then wait two hours he say:
-if you don´t meet I go to other hospital and say this hospital is terrible .
The nurse say come on ,and then you can see the doctor .the girl wake up and she and he go to
Take coffee .in the coffee she say thanks because she save your life , she treat kiss him he say woo I am married and have children’s , she say if you love anyone you have to follow him or her.
He run and go to her house her women say what happen whit you , she a crazy girl pursue me .
The girl lose him and she say no all the mend’s wont to be love .
The girl go to the set and continue the film.
The end !
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ReplyDeleteMy own version of the story:
once upon a time , not far away a girl named Megan Taylor ,an she felt alone because her parents fight every day. For that reason she promise not to fall in love even Brad Pitt pass in her front.
One day in the store she go to buy her favorite candy in the store lucky for she was the last,but she go to pick it but someone pick it first .....
flashback......
- Hey you
- What?
- You have my candy!!
- Sorry i didnt realize that you´re here
Megan go out of the store reali angry
The next day.....
Megan was late for the school like always and wen she come the theacher don´t say anithing because he knows the problems of Megan in her hause...
When Megan enter to the class she saw the boy who stole her candy. Megan was surprised. Later the boy was presented her name was Matthew he was cute but Megan remember the promise she do and she ingnore him. Later in theater class pick them for house work, they had to play Romeo and Juliet. Megan protest but the theacher don't change of opinion. So Matthew asked Megan if she can go to her house for rehearse an d get an ice cream. Megan just run away. On leaving Megan try to go fast but Matthew was waiting at the door. Megan did not have no choice but to go to Matthew.
-and whay you moved here?
-because my parents died and I live here with my grandmother is the only family I have left, arrives yesterday and went for my favorite sweet shop and then I met you
- please forgive and I treating you so badly
-no need to worry after all you're my only friend here
- Friend?
after that they went to Matthew hause, but his grandmother wasn´t there, she had gone to buy things for dinner. fueronn to practise.
after a time, they almost finished, but there was a scene that Megan don´t want to do the kiss scene ....
-bye
-wait ther's one more scene
-but i have to go
So Matthew pounced over Megan, and stole one kiss. So Megan try to go but Matthew stop her and tell she:
im in love whit you and i know abut your promise , and i promise you that i won't break your heart.In that moment Megan say: shut up we are gone to treat.
Spent two years...
And Matthew had not called for several days as Megan became worried. She went to the house of Matthew and told who was in the hospital was very worried. So she went to the hospital, and found Matthew he was dead , she went to the cloust flat and tri to kill her self but onne man stoped she and she was with tears in her eyes , she couldn't see anithing so she trost in him and she think that it was Matthew
the end!!
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ReplyDeleteThis is my version of the story:
One day a crazy women felt alone and the crazy women had a crazy idea, she was through the roof and if the crazy women see a boy walked under it, she drops his shoes and the boy pick up the shoe, but this boy saw that in the final floor and he saw that the women was in the final floor, the boy run upwards for help a women and when the boy stay in the ceiling, the crazy women embraze the boy and She thanked theboy.
The crazy women think that the boy who helped liked it. But the boy doesn´t like and the boy go out and the girl followed him and the boy was ungry and he said he did not liked but the crazy girl did not care and she followed embracing, until the boy had to very strong scream, that he have a girlfriend and she loved your girlfriend and the women is a crazy women. And the women understood that it was the correct boy and she stop and she was silent and returned into the building to wait another boy until she saw another boy and returned to throw tha shoes.
The End.
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ReplyDeleteThis is my version of story:
One day there was a girl on a terrace of a building.The girl wanted to jump because nobody wanted and nobody was paying attention and it was not like the other girls she was so desperate for what I wanted. Then in the street ran a really nice guy and she accidentally callus shoe is the guy realize that she was gonna kill him ran till the terrace of the building told to come down to that was with her, I picked up her hand and she hugged him and told him that there was quiet any problems that call she was safe and that failure to release the vat she thanked him and told him that there was no problem so I invited her to eat a and have a coffee cake for the nerve had asked him past that because they wanted to throw the terrace I answer her or she fell in love with the boy but the boy had a secret he had a daughter and a son and a very good wife the girl liked it so much the guy who said he had fallen in love with the the will could not be said and got up from the table before she is off treatment but reaciono besae quickly and showed him the ring marriage she was paralyzed iva mienras he did not want to let her go so she went behind him because as is so obsessed that he did not see what was persigiendo assume she is amount. The back on the vote and said no more butshe was not going to let go but realized I was crazy so I spend the street and ran, she was not going to leave so he left behind him, she found him put him against the cage and turned it over and put it against the fence she told him she loved him could not be said that he was married and that she was crazy to leave him not to follow her to leave but left to the building that would throw thought if I throw my shoe again maybe someone arrives again as she threw the pass but not so well as she wanted to be on the building and went home sad because he could not get not have what she wanted.
The end!!!
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