Hope you are doing well! For this activity you will write about the topic you like the most. Post your comments before July 15th!
1. Write a composition about one of the following topics, talking about their advantages or disadvantages.
a. using the internet.
b. playing computer games.
c. mobile phones.
2. Write short paragraphs giving your own ideas about the selected topic. Remember to use linking words, such as: because of, in addition, on the other hand, to sum up inside your text in a coherent way.
3. Language/writing aspects:
- Simple sentence structure: subject + verb + complement.
- Look for useful vocabulary you need.
- Check grammar, spelling, punctuation rules, etc.
- Check grammar, spelling, punctuation rules, etc.
All your writings will be welcome as comments... Thanks for participating!
Cori Gutierrez Ulloa
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almost all people use mobile phones to call,to send messages,to takepictures,to caht,to surf online and so on because of technological advances,people can take mobile phones according to their personality.
Using mobile phones help us to communicate with others around the world or to find people wherever.In addition,there are many cheap cellphones and some applications to play or to call free every person.
ON th other hand are many persons disppointed by using cell phones,because it may cause reality disconnection and demotivate physical,activities ,some think it takes health´s problems,in fact, it is dangerous to children because of the radiation.
FInally,cell phones are very useful lately i belive that using mobile phones is a good idea we must have carful with the AGE OF PERSON WHO IS USING IT, IS REALLY IMPORTANT remember do sport out and share time whith your friends and family dont use the cell phone all time
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ReplyDeleteThe topic i choose is the cle phone
The cell phone has become an indespensable for the adulthood and children, it is not only a means to recieve and answer call's, smartphones now allow us to do many activities such internet browsing, social networks, interaction, chat take pictuers, record videos,etc. Manufactores are diveloping cell phones amed to children, the case of Nkia C3, amd Mo1, the Mo1 developed whit a toy company andtelphonic compani in Spain. In france the minister of healt issued horning againest excesive cell phone use by young children.
For me the disadvantages that may present excesive of the call are:
-Many causes whit drawal, disconection from reality and lonles
-High degreeof dependence
-Discorge phisical activity and autboor can play
-Cause distinres in other forms of entretaiment
And forme, believe that there are more advantages you have, whit it this:
-Heplps to cut distance are keep in touch whit people allover the world
-For portabolity, we can place people where they are inmediatly
- It,s low cost. Currenty,there are phones that in tree grate video and audio program's like Skype
Thanks for your time
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ReplyDeleteThe topic i chose is the use of mobile phones in our society, many people from all ages has a mobile phone, and now it has become an indispensable part of our life, and for many people, a need, but the mobile phones have advantages and disadvantages.
the "mobile technology" is advancing more and more, the mobile phones of today aren´t what they were 20 years ago, now you can get access not only to calls, to games, chats, apps an more! In addition you can have an internet-connected mobile phone, mobiles with camera and video recording, tactile screens, ultra slim phones, iphone, Xperia, RAZR, Blackberry and Galaxy are examples of the actual cell phone-technology, and the technology for sure will continue advancing.
In the other hand, the mobile phones can be harmful; they can have some effects in the health and behavior of the people. Some of the disadvantages are:
Cancer and headache because of the radiation produced by the phone´s battery, addiction to the social networks, video-game addiction, malformation in the hand and the fingers, attention disease and difficulties at the work and study.
To sum up the mobile phones are really helpful for the people and short distances so the people can communicate but we have to moderate their use so we can get really bad problems.
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ReplyDeletethe topic i chose is mobiles phones
what are the advantages and disadvantages of using the mobile phone?
The mobiles phones are one of the projects that have been change the form of communicate during the last years, because of those projects that have been change the form of how to do some thinks and this have advantages and disadvantages.
The mobiles phones help us to communicate with other people more easily without gives importance to de distance , also you can take a pictures or make a video ,send a message or call someone also you can look for something on social networks. There are different kinds of mobile phones so you can chose the one you like the most and buy it of curse if you can do it. In addition many people love those machines and use it to play listen to music saw videos and have fun.
On other hand many people said that it will be dangerous because you can have a message that makes you give personal information and they van stole or kill you, and other think is that in fact some even think that is addictive because of the service of the social networks make that people spend more time in their mobiles phones and don´t pay attention to the other people or make problems with the family.
To sump up, there are both advantages and disadvantages in the using of the mobiles phones. I believe that it can be good think while people don´t use it all time just when they want to have fun or communicate but for a little time like 10 minutes or 1 hour and after that can make another think.
ok thats my opinion
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ReplyDeleteThe topic I chose is the Internet
Advantages and disadvantages of the Internet
Many people do not have time to investigate in books, and that’s why the internet exists .You can find information, homework’s, pages, everything you want
Internet helps working and student’s people because it is very easy to found information you want and if you investigate in books is most difficult and it takes many hours.
In addition the Internet is usually in the people a good tool to communicate with yours friends in other country because of is cheaper and you can find more friends in your same country but in other city or in you same city.
The internet in addition is very entertaining for people who likes play matches of football or of all kinds the games you want. Also you can play others games for example: to cook, to kill, and to run…
On the other hand Internet can be dangerous because it can be, an addiction or you can be in danger by the misuse of Internet. If you use very much
Internet you can involve your physical and mental health. Internet has many bad things and may in danger children in learning.
to sum up the internet can be good and bad for all people but if you use it it sparingly the internet can be good for you and you can enjoy it.
But you have to take care in internet because it can be dangerous for you and more people that fall into the trap of the internet and this people have problems in their health mental and physical, have problems with other people of internet that not know in life real.
If you take care necessary, everything will be fine...
Thanks and take care of the Internet…
Bye Bye…
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ReplyDeleteThe topic I chose is: Playing Computer Games, now a days a lot of children or teenagers use computer games as a way of distraction, but is it correct?...
We can say that playing computer games is a good way of distraction when you're boring, you can play them with friends, you can have a good time, and you can play them while you're listening music or something like that. In addition, every day the games, as the technology, are more advanced, and have better characters, better illustrations, etc.
In the other hand, playing computer games can be a really bad distraction; they can have some effects in the health and behavior of the people, in special of the children or teenagers. Also playing computer games can become an addiction to you, and it's too hard to leave.
In my opinion, is good that people play computer games because is part of life, I mean that now we're living in a different way, we are having a great advance you know; but for me playing computer games have more disadvantages than advantages. Because people spend a lot of time playing computer games, they don't do useful things like sports or studies, they start to be more concentrate in computer games and they leave to a side the thing that really import.
Before you saw children and teenagers playing with a ball, with a rope, with colors, things like that; but now you see children and teenagers focused in stereotypes, I mean that it's hard to see children and teenagers smoking, drinking or being drugged.
To sum up, technology, internet, mobile phones and computer games are part of our new life, but it doesn't mean that we have to leave the simple things. We have to be really careful with the time we spend playing computer games and with what we play. And to keep in mind that what really cares is your life and that what is happening at this time.
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ReplyDeleteI´ll tell you some of the advantages and disadvantages of the internet.
Internet has been an excellent innovation for or people and it makes our life easier, but, as it has so much advantajes, so much disadvantajes are in it.
The main advantajes are that the internet makes communication much easier, you can mmet and interact with many people from all over the world, tracking real time information is possible in the internet, the search for information becomes much easier, and, it is possible to share many personal things or knowledge that can serve another, and thus, becomes very profitable
But, there are a lot of disadvantagesof the internet: just as it is easy to find good information, you can find information just as bad. We generated a large agency, that be lost of work, and, it makes born other exilssuch as spam, malware, plofireration of viruses, phising, etc.
Well, to sum up, internet is an excellent way, for many people the best one, to search information, interact with others and share things. But, on the other hand, we have that internet is also so dangerous if we don´t use it in the correct way.
So, that was my opinion.
Thank you.
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ReplyDeleteThe topic I choose is MOBILE PHONES...
¿ What are the advantages and disvantages of using this devices?
The people needs to communicate from one place to another and this why the mobile phones were invented, Because of the long distances of the places, and now everyone has one, and now it has a lot of new applications for distract us.
Using mobile phones helps people that can't travel from one place to another because it is so far away, to communicate in a fast form. In addition you can send messages and play in them. Perhaps the greatest advantage of have a mobile phone is that you can carry it to everywhere and you don't need cable or something like that.
On the other hand, some people think that mobile phones are unnecessary, because also exist the phones and they do the same (for them). Also mobile phones produce bad waves and they damage the nature and If we use it too often we can be addicted and also damage us.
To sum up there are both, advantages and disvantages to mobile phones, I think it's a good thing , as people don't use it too often, use it for calls, messages, music and games is a good idea.
Thank you for reading!!!
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ReplyDeleteI´ll tell you some of the advantages and disadvantages of using the internet.
Nowadays all the people use yhe internet almost every day. It is very strange that a people doesn't use the internet because of that internet we can help a lot, everything is in the internet. Also the internet is easy to use.
The advantage of internet as i just said are: The internet is very easy to use, the internet we can help, for example the social networks such as facebook, twitter, yahoo, etc. In addition enter to internet can be funny and interesting because you can listen to music, you can play in the pages of games, etc. Aso the internet we can help job seeking, need the information for task, etc. In addition the internet can be anywhere for example in your mobile phone, in your computer, etc. For these reasons almost everyone use the internet.
On an other hand the disadvantage of internet are: the people will become lazy because the internet does everything for example if you have a homework that you have to read a book and the teacher asks for the resume some people seek internet can be addicted bacause the person having social networks and the people who have a internet addiction can get sick. Also the internet can be dangerous because something the person give your information and other person can steal.
To sump up the internet is good for people who know how to use and bad who do does't know how to use. The internet is interesting but not in axcess.
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ReplyDeleteI'm going to talk about mobile phones.
The mobile phones are very popular nowadays. Because of our modern lifestyle the mobile phones are very important.
Mobile phones are very useful because they help us to communicate with other people if they are far, even if they are in other countries, because there are companies that have extended worldwide, so it's not difficult to communicate. In addition, most of the mobile phones are made with a lot of technology, and have loads of applications, also people has invented "cell linings" that are now on many colours and designs.
On the other hand, people become addicted to phones and literally "unplug" from the world. Also other people say that mobile phones produces radiations that are bad for health. The mobile phones have made our lifes really easy, more than the necessary. We have become slaves of the mobile phones.
To sum up, there are advantages and disadvantages, but i found more advantages, I think mobile phones are very useful but we have to use it carefully.
INTERNET: its advantages and its disadvantages.
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Internet was initially developed for the U.S.A. militaries, then, it was used by the government and for school investigation, business and communications.
Internet give us many advantages in order to find information and communications by spending a few time, because we don’t need go to a library . We can find Wi Fi anywhere in towns and cities, so we can use a portable computer , an iphad , or a phone to connect up with a lot of information and personal messages, every twenty four hours a day and three hundred sixty five days a year.
In the other hand if we have a wireless modem we can get connection in a country house using internet. Twenty years ago, our fathers had to go to a library in order to find school information. Now, its easy to find information for a homework.
In addition , if we have data base we can find the information equivalent to many thousands libraries.
Disadvantages:
Because of the facility to accede to internet , children and boys spend much time and they forget important matters of their lifes.
In other hand, there are not regulation about themes , images, and qualities of the information we find in internet, so, it could be dangerous for children and very young people .
To sum up, students, parents and teachers have to be watchful about the information they find in internet.
Internet is one of the most important inventions in history. It is a network of milions of computers around the world, connected by phone lines, satellites or cables. Millions of people from all over the world use it every day, so I think that Internet has more advantages than disadvantages.
ReplyDeleteInternet has made the world a real global village which permits us to travel, pay bills or do the shopping without going out from our houses. We can read newspapers, play games or even plan our holidays. A huge merit of Internet is a possibility to download music and films in no time.
We can also communicate with other people from all over the world by means of programs like IRC, ICQ or GG. We can join a newsgroup and share our special interests with each other. A very useful thing is an electronic mail, because it is faster than regular post and even air mail. Internet offers a lot of information from every branch of knowledge, so you can find everything for your schoolwork or job there, or just find more about your hobbies.
Unfortunately, Internet has several drawbacks, especially in Poland. In our country intrernet is still too expensive and connections are not fast. Generally, one disadvantage of the Internet is a danger of getting used to it, computer can become a drug for some people.In Internet there is so much information that finding what you want can take hours. Other bad point of internet are some web sites which are not suitable for children, for example sites about violence, sex or sects.
In conclusion, Internet has more good sides than bad ones, and I think that it's improving all the time, so in the future it will be still better.
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ReplyDeleteI chosen the topic was the use of internet
as such the internet has advantages and disadvantages
advantages: the communication of people around the world is also easy and fast online social networks is the communication which facilitates more, also you can shop for clothes, technology, accessories, pets etc with just making a click and to the fun of young children internet offers a variety of online games and free
Disadvantages: internet contains too many disadvantages such as the hachers impersonation pages indevidas viruses among others but the biggest problem in my opinion is internet addiction internet as this problem is today and is being presented too many times in latin america another problem is that the union has lost family to be on the internet
In conclusion, Internet has more good sides than bad ones, and I think that it's improving all the time, so in the future it will be still better.
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ReplyDeleteI chose MOBILE PHONE
In my opinion, I think there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages the following I going to discuss about that.
I’m 12 years old and I have a mobile phone my parents give to me only for calling in case of emergency. Until now have not used yet but I recognized that I will use in the future. In addiction I use my mobile phone to hear music and I loved because is easy comfortable and can use in any place.
In the other hand my aunt is an electronic engineer, so she tall me that the mobile phone has components such as a battery and antenna. The battery can be dangerous because when is hot is extremely hot this is and advise this going to exploit.
The antenna produces a small radiation and this could affect the brain.
After all these reasons I must use the mobile phone only in important issues.
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ReplyDeleteI'm going to talk about mobile phones.
The mobile phones has become an indispensable ithem in adults an icreasingly children.
Because of is not only to receive and answer calls, now smartphones allow us to do many activities as social network interacion,chat,take pictures,record videos,etc...
In addition there are some disadvantages as disconnection from reality,loneliness,high degree of dependence,discourages physical activity,disinterest in other forms of entertaiment,health problems,etc...
On the other hand there are many advantage as be in contact with people all over the world, we can locate people where they are immediately, currently there are mobile phones thaat integrate videoo and audio with programs like Skype where call anyone in the world is free, ther's multiple applications as text or voice messagin, can see the news and events.
To sum up we are in globalized world where technologies are already part of our lives,however we must pay attention and caution in the mobile phones in adults and especially children.
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ReplyDeleteI choose the topic “USING THE INTERNET"
COMPOSITION:
Many people make use of internet because it is a great tool that allow people to have access to any kind of information and besides it make life more easier for students, workers and people in general.
Advantages:
Using the internet helps students to find information to help them with their university works. More over one of the most interesting advantages of internet is the communication through email, skype and and other programmes.
disadvantages:
One the other hand internet could be dangerous because there are a lot of webpages that contains information that perturb to children. More over there are persons that like to look for information to steal counts or make prejuice to other persons.
To sum up there are both advantages and disadvantages to have access to internet. I belive that it could be a good tool. A good recomendations is that we should take care with the web pages we visit because they can have bad information or pictures that are inappropiopiate for children even for adults.
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ReplyDeleteThe topic I choose is using internet.
What are the advantages and disadvanantages of using the internet?
Most of the people in the world use internet.
The internet helps a millons of person in the world. In the internet you can communicate to orther people in the world. The internet help a people that want to work, want to study, want to communicate.
In internet you can get to communicate face to face with other people in the other continent. In internet you can get to know a person from other part in the world. In internt you can work, you cant communicate, you can play, you can study in academy for example study English, Cook and Arts.
Advantages: you can communicate with other people in the world. You can wanted a job, you can chat with your friends and your fammily. You can play a video games, etc.
Desadvantages: you can resive a threats. You can damage your body with use internet and computer. You can damage your eyes, your circulation, your hands, your legs and your brain. You can comunicate with people can harm your family and you.
In conclution: the internet is more importand in the world. I think the internet is very imporand in the world and in the human. The internet its so fun. The internet is so succesful.
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ReplyDeleteADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES!
The Internet... have a lot of advantages, like that we can communicate with people that is aways from us, it makes us easy to share somethings, so now we don't need to much the books, it has a lot of entertainment, and a lot of more things, but also it has some disadvantages like that can make you addict, you can talk with persons you don't know. For me, the internet is one of the best things the human made.
Playing computers games... is a form of distraction a disadvantage of it is that you lose a lot of time playing a game because then you want more and more. But if you are boring it can make you fell better. If you don't control it, it can be an addiction.
Mobile phone is something that make our life ease, it helps you to communicate with people that isn't with you. It makes somethings easy but is a big attractive for people to stole it.
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ReplyDeleteI chosen the internet ....
first the advantages, the internet is useful for our homeworks, we can in addition provide information. in terms of social, we can talk or chat with our friends and serves to communicate with distant relatives. The Internet has everything you need and we can see the entertainment.
On the other hand the disadvantages are that it isn't safe because of some people are bad, also sometimes is complicated, Don't have coverage in all places and can create addiction.
to sum up the Internet is good and bad at the same time, it is useful and dangerous
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ReplyDeleteThe topic i choose is the cle phone
Before of, the cell phone has become an indespensable for the adulthood and children, it is not only a means to recieve and answer call's, In adittion the smartphones now allow us to do many activities such internet browsing, social networks, interaction, chat take pictuers, record videos,etc. Manufactores are diveloping cell phones amed to children, the case of Nkia C3, amd Mo1, the Mo1 developed whit a toy company andtelphonic compani in Spain. In france the minister of healt issued horning againest excesive cell phone use by young children.
For me, on the other hand the disadvantages that may present excesive of the call are:
-Many causes whit drawal, disconection from reality and lonles
-High degreeof dependence
-Discorge phisical activity and autboor can play
-Cause distinres in other forms of entretaiment
And forme to sum up, believe that there are more advantages you have, whit it this:
-Heplps to cut distance are keep in touch whit people allover the world
-For portabolity, we can place people where they are inmediatly
- It,s low cost. Currenty,there are phones that in tree grate video and audio program's like Skype
Thanks for your time
Hi all!
ReplyDeleteI´ll tell you some of the advantages and disadvantages of the internet. For me the internet is very useful, beneficial and bad.
Advantages.
The internet has many advantages in order to make our things like homework, jobs. research, we can talk with friends, chat, etc.. But we must always use a consiencia the internet and not using it for evil.
Disadvantages.
The internet has many disadvantages, because there are bad people who do not use the internet and get good very bad things, there are also addiction to the internet, because a person may be obsessed with the internet.
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