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The idea in this activity is to create a short story (15 lines at least). You must tell it writing simple sentences, using the past and past continuous tenses.
For doing it, some sentences will be given. You have to include them in your story. The sentences are as follows:
For doing it, some sentences will be given. You have to include them in your story. The sentences are as follows:
It was 10 pm and I was late for the party.
I got my car. I drove to the party.
A dog ran into the road. I saw the dog.
I tried to stop. I lost control of the car.
I hit a tree.
I got my car. I drove to the party.
A dog ran into the road. I saw the dog.
I tried to stop. I lost control of the car.
I hit a tree.
Please, undeline the sentences inside your story!
I recommend you to make a sketch. Then, review and check grammar aspects, spelling and punctuation signs, and the rules for writing given in class. Your story must be coherent and creative. Use all of your imagination!
I recommend you to make a sketch. Then, review and check grammar aspects, spelling and punctuation signs, and the rules for writing given in class. Your story must be coherent and creative. Use all of your imagination!
When finishing, add your story as a comment... it will be welcome!
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ReplyDeleteThis is my story!
TITLE: In shok
I was eating in my hause. I looked the clock.It was 10 p.m. I was late to the party. I went to the car. I got in the car. I drove to the party. I was in the Salli street. A dog ran into the road. I saw a shadow. I saw the dog. A dog Black whit spots white. I tried to stop. I lost control. I was turned. I hit a tree. I saw the dog he is did. I was in shok. The firefighters save me life. I woke up I was in a hospital. I broke one leg and one arm. My sister Ximena was there. She is very worried. In that moment I dident remember anythink. I went to my house. I started to remember somethings. I was happy. I was alive. Now I can start my life again. I was started to study political science. I was very happy!.
The end
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ReplyDeletethis is my story
it was 10pm. I was watching my favorite TV program. The phone rang. It was my friend. it was his say good bay. Because he go to USA next week. It was too late. I take a shower. I go to garage. I take the carand i start it. I saw a women. She say. If you go to this party. You will hit the house of your negboor. But in one second the womwn disapare. I was so scary. But i continue.After i arrive. A mister give me a letter. That say. You will make all thinks that you propoused. I was bery scary. When i arrive to the party. It was any one in this house. I will go to the car. But the door dont open. I will walk to my house. I walked in the street. When i hear a sound in the forest. I walked most fast. But the sound don´t disapare. I was in a neighboorhod. I run and i saw a shop. And i buy a soda and a patatoeschip. i sit in a chair in the park. Before i ate. I start to walk. I saw a friend. I say to him. Where is the party?. The party?. yes. I don´t know. There isn´t any party in the town. O ok. I saw my house.I run to my house. But after i saw the mister. So i enter to my house. The ligths were off. I turn it on. And my friends say sorprise. I was so happy. All my friends was in my house
it was excelent¡ the end
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ReplyDeleteFive years ago I went to Australia to my cousin's party. I was in the hotel. I was eating. I saw the clock. It was 10 pm. I was late for the party. I went to the garage. I got in my car. I drove to the party. I was so exited. I was listening to music. My cousin called me. She said she had a problem with the drinks. She asked me to carried some drinks. I picked up the phone. A dog ran into the road. I saw the dog. I was scared. I tried to stop. It was possible. I lost control of the car. I hit a tree. I was faint. I called to my sister. She came. She carried me to the hospital. The doctor said that it hadn't been anything serious. My cousin called me. She asked me why I am not in the party. I said she what hapened. She arrived to the hospital. She was concerned. I said to she that it hadn't been anything serious. Minutes later she went to the party. They gave me exit three days later.
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ReplyDeleteThis is my story
TITLLE:the birthday's odissey.
I was in the house. My phone rang. It was a friend. He was calling for inviting me to his birthday’s party. It was at his country house. It was at 9:45pm. I forgot it. I took a shower. I dressed me. I ate something. I bought a gift for him. I got in the car. I started the car’s engine. I started My short travesty. I drove to the party. It was 10pm and I was late for the party. I was driving very very fast at 150 k/h. A dog ran in the road. I saw the dog. I tried to stop. I lost the control of the car. I hit a tree. My arm was hurt. I got out of the car. I looked at the dog. I killed it. I called the tow. The tow arrived. The tow’s driver forgot to take me to the party. For arriving I had to walk by 2 hours. I looked at the house. It was empty. The party finished yet. I had to walk by 2 hours to arrive in the city. Another 30 minutes for arriving in the hospital. When I was in the door I fell dismayed. I was dismayed by 20 hours. When I got up I was in the hospital. I looked at my arm. It had gypsum. I recovered after 6 months. I visited my friend. I told him what happened. He trust of me
The end
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ReplyDeletetree weeks before. I`m in my hause. My best friend call me. Is her anual party. I see the clooc`k are the 8:00. I`m go to the batrum and take a shawer. I`m go to take clotes. I`m go to my car. The car don`t put on. It was 10 and i was late for the party. A dog run into the road. I saw a dog. The dog are intresting. Take 2 bigs and red eyes. Her fur are back. Takes a misteri look. I tired stop. I lost the3 control of the car. I hit in a tree. Today i`m in a hospital. I`m so exityng.
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ReplyDeletethis is my story
We went with my parents. The weekend at the farm, located in Villeta . Usually. The friends of my parents and their children. Have this same habit. We arrived around 5 pm. My mother started to prepare food. We had dinner together. Just after 7 pm. I was reading one of my favorite books. When the phone rang. He was one of my friends. John, also was with her parents and a group of friends. They organized a party. To share. And celebrate the birthday of Mary. cousin of John, and I called to invite me I gladly accept.
I invited my parents. But they were tired. And did not accept the invitation.
Being 9.30 pm. I went in my car to comply With the invitation. Listening to music on the radio. When suddenly I saw a dog that ran hastily. Towards the road. I tried to avoid it. But lost control of the car. And I crash into a tree. Fortunately nothing happened to me. I got out to check the car. Broke down the front. And broke a lamp. The damage was not much. And that allowed me to continue my journey. Arrive late to the party. Around 10 pm. My friends were worried. I told them about the incident. But this was not reason to enjoy the party and share with my friends. I was happy despite the circumstances.
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I was in my house. It was 10:00pm. I was late to the party. It was the birthday of my best friend. I went to the garage. There was a beatiful cat. I got in my car. I sticked of car. I was of the mitle of the road. A dog ran into the road. I couldn't stop. I was nervous. The dog died?. I was too scared. I should go to the party. I stiked on car. I went to the party. Arriving to the party. My best friend was sad. She was angry. I arrived late to de party. I explained to her. She didn't hear me. After an hour shehear me. She apology about this. I was sad. The dog died?!. I don't know!. I went to my house. I ate something. It was 1:00am. I went to sleep. Went I opened my eyes. It was early the morning. I took a shower. I turned on the tv. I saw that the dog was well. I was calmed down a lot.!
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ReplyDeleteI'm going to present you my story:
TITTLE: My dream
It was night. It was ten o'clock. I was late for the party of my best friend Paula. I ate one pizza. I got in my car. I accelerate, but I saw a dog. I tried to stop, but it was impossible. I was so fastly. I lost the control of the car. I hit with a tree. I was away to go to the car. I felt that I flew. I walked to the party. I saw one of my friends that is call Carlos. H e said me that Zac E fron wwas in the party. I walked slowly, because I wasn't wanted to get ugly. I came late but I was so beautiful. I saw he, henwas Zac Efron. I was so exited. I enjoided it. One of my friends that is call Valentina drove me on a limousine to my home. I went to my house at five o'clock and my parents were angry with me, because I said them that I was going to be in house at eleven o'clock, but I came asleep. At the morning. I forgot that it was a dream, a nice dream. I relaxed and enjoied the day.
THE END
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I was in the house. To enrroll for the party. And it was 10pm. When i had eat. And go down to the kitchen. For someting to eat. The phone rang. And answer. I asked how was. I answer. Was my friend Jake. I was waiting for my in the party. With some friends. I was talking. And i discover that it was late for the party. I take my jacket. And i go outside. I got my car. My car didn't work. I tryed a lot. At the end i work. I started my car. I didn't saw anythyng. I saw a dog came. I try to stop. But i could almost ran over me but. I turned collision with a tree. And i crash. My friend Jake came to me. And call me an ambulance. Was weighed me to the emergency room. The doctor told me i only had. A few sacratches hemorragea and a little on te nose. I was released from the hospital. My friend Jake i went up to the car. The led me to my house. The next day i had a contucion in my head. That to return to the hospital. I felt really bad. The unit began making. Tuttuttuttuttuttuttuttutpiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiip. I was dead .
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It was 10pm and I was late for the party. It was my friend's birthday. First take juice. I go t the garage. I go to take up. I drove to the party. I lose the control of my car. A dog ran into the road. I saw the dog. I realized that this dog is me. I had lost last month. I open the door of my car. I put the dog in the car. I go to the party. It was late. I was arriving to the party. My friend call me. I slept . I lost the control of the car. I crash in the house in my friend. Goodness crash in the backyard of the house. all went to the backyard of the house. I was unconscious. My friende go to HOSPITAL. I was ill. I walk out. I pass a month and recuperate. I go to the
house of my friend. I give the money to reparete your house.
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I was in the work. I was 10 pm. I was afternoon in the party. Was the partyin my girlfriend. Down the stairs run. I fell the in stairs. I got in my car. I drove the party. Going 200 kilometers per hour. I almost collied with another car. Arive the party to 12 pm. My gilfriend hit me for being late. Dance one hour. I went back up to my car. I was very taken. A dog ran into the road. I saw the dog. I tried to stop. I lost of the car. I hit a tree. I woke up in amonth. Was in the hospital. Was poorly. I broke a leg. I patried lat the nose. My mom was very worried. Last a year in recovery. Then i had more care. Drunk driving does not go.
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ReplyDeleteI´m going to present my story.
It was 10 pm. I was in my house. I was late for going to Stephanie´s party. I had a shower. I got dressed. I went to the garage. I got into the car. It was raining. I drove carefuly. I remembered that I didn´t bring any present for Stephanie. I went to the mall. It was closed. It was 11 pm. I was very late. Stephanie phoned me. She said that th e party finshed half hour ago. I started to cry. I was angry. I got out of the car. I fell off. I broke my dress. I got into the car in road of house. A dog ran into the road. It was black and big. The dog scared me. I tried to stop. I lost the control of the car. I hit a tree. I hurted my arm. I got out of the car. The dog was dead. I called to the police. I had to pay because killing a dog. I damaged my car. The police took me to the hospital. I fell sleep. I dreamt that I arrived late to the party and I had an argument with Stephanie. I woke up. My mother was there. She was very worried. My arm was good. We lift the hospital. I bought a new car. I started normally to work.
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I was in my house. It was late. The phone rang. ask who he was. It was my amiga.Me was invited to a party at the club. I told him I was over there.I bathe. I change. Ate something. I went to the garage. The phone rang. was my friend. Told me he was going to start the party without me. I worry. Drive as much as I could. I went through a dog. Try to avoid it. I went against a tree. I woke up. dog.Me found had killed the officer. I get to a clinic. I was told that I had just broken his arm. I went to the house. I slept. The next day. I got up. there was blood on the blanket. I went as fast as I could to the hospital. The device had dick. I panic. After I put everything in black. And remember there is no more
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ReplyDeleteThis is my story:
Just got home. Because my parents had invited to eat. I see the watch. Was 14:00. I was tired. I saw a detectives movie. I see the watch. Was 17:00. My best friend called me. He was invited a party. I was tired. I went to the bed. I awoke. I see the watch, was 19:00. I take a shower. I was 21:00. Was too late. I went to grab the car keys. I closed the door. Take the car. I opened the door. And drove to the party. I saw a dog. Was running on the road. Was black and white spots. I lost the control of the car. I hit with a tree. But scope to hurt the dog. Tad a vet nearby. take it flat. The veterinary told me: the dog was die. I was cry. I came up with the idea of a fundation. The fundation is trying to pick up stray dogs. Feed them, bathe them, and a home. I put my family in the city signs the foundation. Somepeople came to my foundation. Each day was happier.
The End.
My story! It was to be grat for you, teacher Fredy.
ReplyDeleteThe party was at 10:pm. I fell asleep. I woke up really late. I got my car. I remeber that I had to go with Alex. It was 10:15 pm. We was late. I was driving really fast. A dog enter on the road. I lost car control. I hit a tree. Ale was hurted. I went to the hospital. Alex was with doctors. Someone stole me the car. I said it to mom. She went to the hospital. She called to police. I called with they. They spoke out me. Alex came. He said that he was good. Police invited us to policce office. We went in mom`s car. Mom stoped for nuy a bread. I saw my car. I said it to mom. She said it to police. We went to the party. Mom slept on it. I was gilted. The dog that I almost hurt was my dog.
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ReplyDeleteI was in the park. My phone rang, it´s my brother my dog disapared I am go to the city to search, i am go in diferent parts in the city i go ousid the city go to the river and te mountains. I return to my house. I decide that i continiuo my search the oder day. The oder day i started to stuck papers on the houses that sed lost dog at 10 pm i am go to the my car and started to search have started to rain an have go to the lakelook in the lake water and was not in the water saw the road my dog was across the street when a car ran over him quickly take him to vet his wound healed and recovered and everything returned to normal and make my dog died at 10 years old
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ReplyDeleteI was in my home. The postman hit the door. When i oppened the door don´t were anyone. The postman left one postal. The postal was for me. It was for my best friend. He was writting hi is my birthday and have a big party but i want you to come ,by. I take a shawer. I looked a clock and it was 10pm. I was late for the party. I got In my car.i drove to the party. A dog ran into the road. I saw the dog. I tried to stop. I lostthe control of the car. I hit a tree.
THE END
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ReplyDeleteI was in Paris. It was my cousin's party nataly. It was 10 pm and I was late for the party. I fix. I change.
I got my car.it was raining. the road was wet. I drove to the party. I drove to the party. A dog ran into the road. I saw the dog. I tried to stop. I lost control of the car. I hit a tree.from that moment I did not see anything. I was confused. I didnt know where I was. my cousin told me what had passed. I had saved the dog. from that moment I always go to church. I always wonder. because it saved me,why my.
why there was other person rescued. A few days I recover. Since then I always go to church.
I will always be indebted to.
the end
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ReplyDeleteThis is my story
Title:the dream party
I am in the scoohl. The school's day is finished. Yenni is asked for my because is say whit i am going of your party. I am say "yes". And going to my huse. Eat a sandwich. Take a shawer. And sleeping. Is now the 9:30. Take a jacket. And take a car. I am going in 120Km. And in the street saw a dog. Is had the eyes green.I am hit. Have 2 parts of the body in 2 1 leag and 1 hand. What ¿the clock?. !I am in a deram!. Whoooooo. Its 8 of the next day of the party. This is increibol.
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It was 10 pm and I late for the party. Before to go I was drink beer. I got in my car. I was fast in avenue a 100km/h. I sow the dog. This night was rain. I lost control of the car. I tried the stop. The dog ran away. I was jump the car. I hit the tree. The car stop for the rock. I mouht the car. I drove to the party. Was the 11:00 pm. My friend to call for my. Speack for the party was very good. I intertaiment. I hit for the other car. I coming hospital or 12:00 pm.
I wound in my body. I leave the car in the driveway. the police took me out part.
It was the worst day of life
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ReplyDeleteI´m going to present my story.
It was 10 pm and I fell a sleep. I late for the party. I woke up really late. I got my car. I remeber that I had to go with Nata. It was 10:15 pm. The phone rang. was my friend Nata . Told me she was going to start the party without me. It was 11 pm. I was very late. Nata phoned me. She said that th e party finshed half hour ago. I started to cry. I was angry. I saw a dog came. I try to stop. The phone rang. was my boyfrient .we talked one time. rang the door. It is Nata . she brounght cake.
THE END!!